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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form workshop

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Sunku 6 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Sat, 2018-02-17 01:29

Roast fest
Burning bricks
And fire bombs

Niceness
Been kicked out
Pissed off in the house
__
I’m like
A strange bird
Caught in the wind

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Sunku 5 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Thu, 2018-02-15 19:20

Sadness
Feels like crap
In this sunken place

Joyless
Is as a
withered dead rose

Spiritless
Have no zeal
Under dark clouds
—-
The sunsets
And it rises
Both are beautiful

Storms rage
Hides the sun
Nature just waits

Roses
Strives and grows
Strong among thorns

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

PARKLAND (Sunku shop)

Submitted by scribbler on Thu, 2018-02-15 17:30

Ajar
doors and lives
of innocents

Litter
soft and dear
strewn by monster

Revenge
is certain
but will not heal

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

SunKu 4 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Thu, 2018-02-15 03:47

Our love
Like winter’s
Dead twiggy trees

Two ships
In the night
Missed each other

The search
For our love
Halted long ago

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

SunKu 3 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Wed, 2018-02-14 14:25

I’m bored
Life suck
Stuck in this house

I Write
I Create
I Watch YouTube

I Feel
Powerless
Trapped this cage
—-
This room
These four walls
Like a prison

Gotta
Find a park
To nature walk

Swan Lake
I need you
And your life force
—-
Hump day
Will it end
I Feel insane

Nature
I Got to go
And reconnect

My Car down
Somebody
come get me
—-
This house
It drives me
Straight up the wall

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Cold Valentine Kisses [Sunku Workshop]

Submitted by raj on Wed, 2018-02-14 05:40

Winter
opens her
darkest closet

Silence
awakens
intimate sighs

Stirring
wailing storms
lulling within

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Now a Sunku, with rhyme

Submitted by weirdelf on Wed, 2018-02-14 02:07

No scars
the past gone
you cannot see

when dark
quivering
so pitifully

I learn
what it was
that made me be me

The first version-
No outward
damage can be seen
the past,
therefore can not have been.

Still in the dark I sometimes see
the things that made me truly me.

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

PAID IN FULL (Sunku shop)

Submitted by scribbler on Tue, 2018-02-13 15:24

Ink blots
of deep red
on sandy ground

Thunder
in clear sky
without lightning

Brave men
no return
tears shed at night

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Tick talks [Sunku Workshop]

Submitted by raj on Tue, 2018-02-13 15:11

Tick talks
of father time
is menacing

Intrudes
silence of
my solitude

Wrecking
wakeful sleep
like a witch hunt

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

SunKu 2 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Tue, 2018-02-13 12:52

Dancing
Red roses
Through blue violets

Yellow
White tulips
Sway in the wind

Lovers
Holding hands
The setting sun.

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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