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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form workshop

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Submitted by IRiz on Tue, 2018-02-13 10:44

ice melts
fog rises
the pond is gone

frightened
wings swooshing
geese have landed

I am
still running
shores of my past

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

禅

Submitted by IRiz on Tue, 2018-02-13 10:27

simple 
peaceful
living within

focused
unwordly
moving upstream 

steady
solitude
please not again

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

one two and three (SUNKU WORKSHOP) IRIZ

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2018-02-13 09:23

tonight
happiness
secretary

mature
feminine
appreciate

REVIEWED at Behest

Tonight
happiness
Secretary

Mature
feminine
appreciate

Hammer
dangerous
celebration

Howz it any better
imagine the event
with closed eyes

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

21st Century Trumpeteer [Sunku Workshop]

Submitted by raj on Tue, 2018-02-13 06:37

"Shit hole"
hard to fix
for Commander

Gutless
"Fire and Fury"
his empty threat

Tweeting
his Trumpets
to raise alarm

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Some Reflection [Sunku Workshop]

Submitted by raj on Tue, 2018-02-13 06:15

Isn't bald
but wider
my forehead.

Someone
I guess Time
mowed the grass

Moon beams
make me reflect
in diffused light

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

hedgehogfriend

Submitted by IRiz on Mon, 2018-02-12 20:54

My friend
is trying
not to scratch me.

But still
his feet stomp,
metal thorns ring.

He can't
hear white noise
of my poems.

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Sunku with a funny tail

Submitted by IRiz on Mon, 2018-02-12 20:44

white fog
ginger hare
on melting slopes

it hops
on the rocks
in my whiskey

and disappears
into the spring

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

SunKu 1 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Mon, 2018-02-12 15:50

Fighting
To be me
Ain’t that easy

People’s
Opinions
Got it twisted

Shaming
Lost it’s punch
Went straight pass me.

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Happens to me [Sunku Workshop]

Submitted by raj on Mon, 2018-02-12 14:24

Scattered
are my thoughts
like spilled pop corn

They stare
even mock
my puzzled look

My muse
has hundreds
mouths to talk

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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