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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form workshop

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To IRiz (the lady of Sunku)

Submitted by Rula on Sun, 2018-03-11 01:52

Iris
Royalty
Faith and valor

Iris
The Heaven's
Bridge to the Earth

Iris
A lady
In Sunku form

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Some Metaphorical Speaking Sunku

Submitted by Rula on Fri, 2018-03-09 15:42

As thorns
Might peck ****s
And kick ***es

Bullets
End the lives
With no mercy

Her words
(Soft fabrics)
Kill with cold blood

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Morning

Submitted by IRiz on Mon, 2018-03-05 16:47

sleepy
blue heron
on Green Lake

feathers
trembling stems
dull winter wind

clearing
their throats
crows bark like dogs

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Origami [Sunku WS]

Submitted by raj on Sun, 2018-03-04 13:27

Still waters
were soaking
my paper boats

I jumped
out of their
sinking feelings

Quickly
turning them
into balloons

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Luminous Strides [Sunku WS]

Submitted by raj on Fri, 2018-03-02 16:06

Back stage
she readies
for a catwalk

Steps out
and dazzles
a crescent smile

Baring
her radiance
with every stride

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Sunku 17 Workshop

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Wed, 2018-02-28 15:48

God speaks
I hear tones
nature buzzing

insight
new ideas
revelations

I write
etch my thoughts
in Poetry

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Morning Walk [Sunku WS]

Submitted by raj on Wed, 2018-02-28 06:16

Gentle
caress on
naked soles

Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs

Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

To Basho

Submitted by IRiz on Wed, 2018-02-28 00:13

To Basho

It is not the end of the day.
But it is almost.
Snow is matte.
Its white lilac doesn't spark
but quietly glows.

The trees radiate cold.
Fallen leaves
suspended in frozen shoals
form illusion of flying maps,
mosaic display
of ancient nations and worlds.

The sun is long gone,
but the sky
still keeps the last beams
fast to the chest.

I am reading aloud the lines
on my palms.
How long do I live, how far shall I go
following traces of birds?

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Sunku 9

Submitted by lonlyhrtsclub13 on Tue, 2018-02-27 21:57

Lonely
In a room
Even when not

Time
Moving slow
Empty walls

Drift apart
Daunted
Unknown

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

Promise Delivered [ Sunku WS]

Submitted by raj on Tue, 2018-02-27 14:51

Seeds
of hope
burst

Bees
deliver
promise

Offspring
births from a
surrogate womb

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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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