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SunKu 2 Workshop

Dancing
Red roses
Through blue violets

Yellow
White tulips
Sway in the wind

Lovers
Holding hands
The setting sun.

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You have painted a great picture here Barbara in this Sunku..a pleasure read...I believe you are loving this form of poetry...

regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

I having so much fun I writing about 10 a day as well as free verse

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I am dancing with you, my friend.

IRiz

Glad you enjoying them

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Trust you to devise such a great example on first try...kudos

Hey

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