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SunKu 4 Workshop

Our love
Like winter’s
Dead twiggy trees

Two ships
In the night
Missed each other

The search
For our love
Halted long ago

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I was thinking about how many stanzas are good for Sunku. Three felt somehow the best.
By writing longer stream you add a dreamy, contemplating touch to the form.
It is a free form and I respect your choice.
I like the way you increase the size of the gap between your characters
Thank you for sharing your poem

IRiz

When I write I get carried away when it’s a new form.

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