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precipitation

how good are the clouds
if they don't soak the land
with grey emotions
and clear the skies;
as do tears
lighten the heart, and
brighten the eyes.

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Actually I am not happy about it and shall be unpublishing it...

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

raj should i remove my verbosity
you did not appreciate it
so it seems
I'm aware u don't like my comments
henceforth
none

has nothing to do with your comment Lovedly..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

nice poem. I like the comparison between the rain clearing the air and tears brightening the eyes.

but I shall be un publishing this because I didn't like it myself...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

like your approach. to the point. a really good poem. glad you did not unpublish.

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