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Me In True Colors (Unpoetic)

I ponder over and over again
on moments which became milestones
but for which
I wouldn't have been

Looking back I see
Cris-cross roads
some traveled more, some less,
which got me

I am left with reminisces
of regrets, promises, opportunities, failures,
I look at them as a collage
in shades and hues of

A look in the mirror
shows me in true colors
I shrug, I smile
realizing I am just an

I step aside
to let it all pass
like water under the bridge
to start all over from

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Thanks Teddy for reading and your comment. The title itself mentions that it is unpoetic because I know I am just an amateur.

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Many thanks for taking time to return to this page even during your holiday and for your encouraging words...

have a great time...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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I cannot tear your unpoetic poem apart, for I can relate very well to the content. I think your message comes across clearly and I relate well to it. just dropped in to say "hello" and give you a smile :)

warmest greetings, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

What a pleasant surprise :) only couple of days back I inquired about you and here you happy to see you and thank you for visiting this page and your encouraging words....makes my day fo0r sure ...

Looking forward to more from you and your poem..i am your fan big time ...

be well...
warm hugs..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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