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precipitation
how good are the clouds
if they don't soak the land
with grey emotions
and clear the skies;
as do tears
lighten the heart, and
brighten the eyes.
Style / type:
Free verse
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2019-03-27 17:24
Kind of...
like eye wash for the brain. ~ Geezer.
.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Wed, 2019-03-27 22:35
glad raj 4 u
you decided to return
the neopoets await you
serendipity is also back
have no fear about poetry
it's for all and free
compose good ones as you are capable of
I have noticed on AP
You are a poet lovely
Have NO FEAR of
partisan
here now no one reads me
so I post occasionally
only
but raj ur sub-lime
now become real lime
Rula
Thu, 2019-03-28 03:49
An awesome
return raj. Eloquent and fresh!
Keep them coming!
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raj
Thu, 2019-03-28 13:09
Thanks for reading
Actually I am not happy about it and shall be unpublishing it...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Thu, 2019-03-28 14:10
before you unpublish
raj should i remove my verbosity
you did not appreciate it
so it seems
I'm aware u don't like my comments
henceforth
none
raj
Fri, 2019-03-29 13:05
has nothing to do with your
has nothing to do with your comment Lovedly..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
gregwa8
Thu, 2019-03-28 15:25
nice poem. I like the
nice poem. I like the comparison between the rain clearing the air and tears brightening the eyes.
raj
Fri, 2019-03-29 13:06
thanks for reading
but I shall be un publishing this because I didn't like it myself...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
nokros
Mon, 2019-07-15 14:00
really
like your approach. to the point. a really good poem. glad you did not unpublish.