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Biography [Sunku]
Simply
keep writing
your book of life
include
all seasons
bright, grey and green
imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage:
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Comments
Rula
Wed, 2018-04-25 15:35
You continue to excel
at sanku form. A special last stanza
"imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink."
A pleasure to read
Keep writing dear raj
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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raj
Wed, 2018-04-25 15:55
Thanks Rula
for the read and encouraging comment...
warmly...
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Thu, 2018-04-26 04:22
Thanks Mark
for the read and kind words...more than addiction I try to write in Sunku form for a) it challenges me to express more in less words and some between the lines and b) so that this form stays active in the eyes of those who care to read even after closure of the Workshop by IRiz and Weierdelf..
Thanks again...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Eumolpus
Thu, 2018-04-26 10:14
a very simply nice poem
a very good affirmation poem. Tight. says a lot. Love the "morbid ink" !
..
Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings
IRiz
Thu, 2018-04-26 11:12
The short form shines in Raj
The short form shines in Raj hands.
IRiz
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 10:25
and dear Raj_sublime
even Iriz will envy
if not smile
you follow her footsteps
so religiously
Sunku is now
your well of creativity
IRiz
Thu, 2018-04-26 11:11
Happy to read your poem, my
Happy to read your poem, my friend.
Today, sunku is spotlighted on official Google page, take a look if you want
https://plus.google.com/+googleplus/posts/2e7czfukPNd
IRiz
raj
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:32
IRiz surely a proud moment for you today
Novel
Idea conceived
with eastern genes
unique
are features
of this brain child
christened
doll Sunku
debuts world wide
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Thu, 2018-04-26 14:19
Thanks Eumolpus, Lovedly and IRiz
Thanks for taking time for the read ...means a lot especially when apparently I am the only one these days to post poems in this form even though few care to read....no issues...i have liked this form and shall use it as often as I can ...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Thu, 2018-04-26 15:51
Irene is very creative
I have read her reference she posted
and glad you raj are
an emblem
of such a unique kind of poem
we will emulate too
guide
us O Lord
of sunku_ raj