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Biography [Sunku]

Simply
keep writing
your book of life

include
all seasons
bright, grey and green

imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink

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Free verse
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at sanku form. A special last stanza
"imprints
shall survive
the morbid ink."

A pleasure to read
Keep writing dear raj

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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for the read and encouraging comment...

warmly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

for the read and kind words...more than addiction I try to write in Sunku form for a) it challenges me to express more in less words and some between the lines and b) so that this form stays active in the eyes of those who care to read even after closure of the Workshop by IRiz and Weierdelf..

Thanks again...

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

a very good affirmation poem. Tight. says a lot. Love the "morbid ink" !
..

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

The short form shines in Raj hands.

IRiz

even Iriz will envy
if not smile
you follow her footsteps
so religiously
Sunku is now
your well of creativity

Happy to read your poem, my friend.

Today, sunku is spotlighted on official Google page, take a look if you want
https://plus.google.com/+googleplus/posts/2e7czfukPNd

IRiz

Novel
Idea conceived
with eastern genes

unique
are features
of this brain child

christened
doll Sunku
debuts world wide

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

Thanks for taking time for the read ...means a lot especially when apparently I am the only one these days to post poems in this form even though few care to read....no issues...i have liked this form and shall use it as often as I can ...
.......................................................................................

raj (sublime_ocean)

author comment

I have read her reference she posted
and glad you raj are
an emblem
of such a unique kind of poem
we will emulate too

guide
us O Lord
of sunku_ raj

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