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Life [Sunku]

Submitted by raj on Thu, 2018-03-29 14:12

Scramble,
unscramble
fill in the blanks

Decode
the abstract
essence of life

Truly
life is a
jigsaw puzzle

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

raj

Fri, 2018-03-30 14:16

Thanks for the read. I didn't understand your comment. Do you mean that you feel that this is not poetic and/or ^5 is to mean that in some line you find the syllable count not conforming to Snku? Will appreciate your clarification.

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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raj

Sat, 2018-03-31 14:27

for coming back and providing clarifications

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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