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Life [Sunku]
Scramble,
unscramble
fill in the blanks
Decode
the abstract
essence of life
Truly
life is a
jigsaw puzzle
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Comments
raj
Fri, 2018-03-30 14:16
Hi Mark
Thanks for the read. I didn't understand your comment. Do you mean that you feel that this is not poetic and/or ^5 is to mean that in some line you find the syllable count not conforming to Snku? Will appreciate your clarification.
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Sat, 2018-03-31 14:27
Thanks Mark
for coming back and providing clarifications
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)