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SWEEP STAKES (Acrostic)
S hades of blue and grey
W atch clouds above at play
E ach swaying in delight
E nacting a chore in sunlight
P aused when dusk makes way for night
S tars slowly made their way
T winkling merrily and gay
A wesome display dazzling the sky
K indling the gazers with a sigh
E nding their chore with a shooting star
S ilently bowing with a blush at dawn
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Rula
Sat, 2016-03-26 11:11
this is a delightful
acrostic dear raj. Like the title too!!
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raj
Sat, 2016-03-26 13:59
Hi Rula
Thanks for the read. Good to know you liked my maiden attempt at Acrostic :)
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2016-03-27 20:41
great acrostic
it all hearts
sweeps