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SWEEP STAKES (Acrostic)

Submitted by raj on Mon, 2016-03-21 15:17

S hades of blue and grey
W atch clouds above at play
E ach swaying in delight
E nacting a chore in sunlight
P aused when dusk makes way for night

S tars slowly made their way
T winkling merrily and gay
A wesome display dazzling the sky
K indling the gazers with a sigh
E nding their chore with a shooting star
S ilently bowing with a blush at dawn

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Rula

Sat, 2016-03-26 11:11

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acrostic dear raj. Like the title too!!

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raj

Sat, 2016-03-26 13:59

Thanks for the read. Good to know you liked my maiden attempt at Acrostic :)

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-03-27 20:41

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it all hearts
sweeps

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