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tips n toes
a brush and paint
color tips and toes
to reflect the moods
but it's winter
mittens and socks
keep them in wraps
snow capped hills
await the summer
to reveal their charm
but winter's too long a wait
for toes to curl, and
tips to leave their mark_
July and August
edge out the rest
to welcome joy
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
IRiz
Tue, 2018-10-30 20:56
I think I remember recently
I think I remember recently you wrote something about mittens and socks, is it the same poem?
IRiz
raj
Wed, 2018-10-31 13:53
Hi IRiz
thanks for the read...yes I did use mittens and red noses in another one...not mittens and socks
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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