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Sunku 6

Muse of my muse
Come hither
Awaken

Purple clouds
Dark tide
Rolling in

Hold me
Shake thoughts
Restless head

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Comments

Sounds like a beginning of a Greek Tragedy.

IRiz

Doesn't it....could be some future storytelling now that I can post again.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

author comment

3 verses, each verse 2/3/4 syllables. But very good
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1rfYBZ9xeQ8

cheers,
Jess
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