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Final Bow

The show is over
Time for me to go
There have been highs
And an all time low

We played together
Until it fell apart
Then played alone
With a broken heart

As the curtain calls
Remember how
I loved you all
As I take my final bow

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the poem has a very easy flow with good word usage to express helplessness and yet satisfaction of giving it your all

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raj (sublime_ocean)

I seem to better with short verse.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

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I not only like your rhyms , but also the message.Simple and clear.
Hope it's not autobiographical though.
Regards

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I seem to do better at short verse. I tend to get sloppy with a lot of words. This makes more sense.

Keep Writing,
Carrie

"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"

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