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Large or Small, have your fill

I thought for a while,
should I or should i not,
I had just finished one
then remembered the gospel
"only one per day"
be it large or small,
sounded cruel

so I made a large one,
then one more before bed,
then another,
finishing them one after the other
to put my mind at ease
before calling it a day,

did I cheat anyone?
I chuckled
"certainly not"
because in the end
I unchecked the option to Publish

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One what

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for reading ..

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Hi, raj,
It sounds like your muse was alive and kickin'! Hope you eventually hit the Publish button for the others! It is so true that the poem in your mind has to be finished before you can put your mind to ease.
Very nice!
L

for reading and your comment..

be well...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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size doesn't matter at all
all is in the mind
drink as much
what else is life meant for
affect must be obtained
life is a one time bliss
you may say kiss
singer ye b
not me
raj_bby

thanks for reading

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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lol. Could have been a large spritz but I'm guessing poem. That's creative my friend

Thank you...Teddy

thanks for the read....good to know you caught the humor....

be well friend..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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My apologies for double post.

Thank you...Teddy

running around in your head, plus so much more, must be like having to cut a wild horse from the herd and letting the others run free again, hoping to recapture them later. Good thing we have our electronic diaries to help out. Nice! ~ Geez.
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thanks for taking time to read and comment. Good to know you found it nice.

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Playful sneakiness to bypass the Neopoet filters.... nice!

you got it spot on ..lol..

be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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