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(L i f e)
(Life) is in parenthesis
birth on one side,
mystery on the other
in between
what we make of it..
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Free verse
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Rula
Thu, 2018-09-06 08:52
Hello
A good read raj. I like those thoughts when they spark with an urge to write them- often happen to me-.I don't know if it is the same here.
PS. maybe you'd like to change the [brackets] to (parenthesis)
to go with your words? Just saying.
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raj
Thu, 2018-09-06 14:17
You are right Rula
You are right Rula
the words popped out of nowhere...may be somewhere from the subconscious...as for parenthesis I shall change the punctuation mark...thanks for noticing it...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Thu, 2018-09-06 14:45
nice one here good idea raj
but 4 birth
u may say
(genetics mix)
afterwards (zero)
in between
(fully yours own)
just a thought
I know I am no patch on u raj
raj
Thu, 2018-09-06 14:53
thanks Lovedly
for reading..
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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