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The Girl From Kentucky

There once was a girl from Kentucky
Who had a fast horse she called Lucky
In high hopes he would race
It was such a disgrace
The Derby to him was horsepucky

— Patricia, Jul 21, 2019

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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Patricia

Patricia

6 years 9 months ago

ditty

Glad you liked it. I had some fun writing it.