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The Girl From Kentucky

Submitted by Patricia on Sun, 2019-07-21 11:34

There once was a girl from Kentucky
Who had a fast horse she called Lucky
In high hopes he would race
It was such a disgrace
The Derby to him was horsepucky

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Geezer

Mon, 2019-08-12 15:50

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a funny little ditty! ~ Geezer.
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Patricia

Mon, 2019-08-12 18:09

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Glad you liked it. I had some fun writing it.

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