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Drunku Haiku

Continual boozing -
Next year's prognostication:
Liver with bunions.

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Structured: Eastern
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Not Explicit Content

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but I think that if you are going to post Haiku, you should post at least three at a time. "Liver with bunions" Ha ! Funny, that. ~ Geezer.
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Honest critique and comments shouldn't hurt.
It's why we are here, to get better at our craft.

..isn't the only criterion.

Breadth counts too.
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xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

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most assuredly
Haiku is not only length
but 'tis also heft.
~ Geezer

Honest critique and comments shouldn't hurt.
It's why we are here, to get better at our craft.

Hi, Edna,
Your title is pretty ingenious!
Lavender

I was quite pleased with it, as the actress said to the bishop (with a smirk).

xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

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lol. That's a genius haiku... All 3 lines. Cheers!

Thank you...Teddy

...flattered.

xxx
Edna
Poet(ess) to the Stars

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