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Classical Composer Limerick #3

The young Johann Nepomuk Hummel
Once drank a whole litre of Kummel;
He said "I can hold it,
My heart will enfold it,"
But he couldn't control his loose bum-hole.

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for the life of me, understand, why you choose to write such pap, when clearly, you are capable of so much more. Be that as it may, a delightful sourness emanates from your pen to tread upon mankind's villains and submerge them in the toilet. ~ Geez.
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..because it is so rude.
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a character in a story that I am currently reading. Corky Laputa in the novel "The Face" by Dean Koontz.
~ Geez.
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...worthless trash novels, so cannot comment.
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and again touche! ~ Geez.
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