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Drunku Haiku

Continual boozing -
Next year's prognostication:
Liver with bunions.

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Structured: Eastern
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Not Explicit Content

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but I think that if you are going to post Haiku, you should post at least three at a time. "Liver with bunions" Ha ! Funny, that. ~ Geezer.
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..isn't the only criterion.

Breadth counts too.
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xxx
Edna
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most assuredly
Haiku is not only length
but 'tis also heft.
~ Geezer

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Hi, Edna,
Your title is pretty ingenious!
Lavender

I was quite pleased with it, as the actress said to the bishop (with a smirk).

xxx
Edna
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...flattered.

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Edna
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