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Classical Composer Limerick #4

The Hungarian composer Franz Liszt
Sat down on a lady friend's fist;
With the suavest of smiles,
He said "stroke my piles
While I toss myself one off the wrist".

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Free verse
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Hi Edna, you always let us have a good laugh with your limericks! I love the last two
The title, theme, spacing an all else are fine. Kudos to you!
All the best, Gracy

"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

..for your comment.

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