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excuse me...i faced formatting probles..i shall repost
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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mona
Thu, 2010-12-30 14:50
Happy New Year Raj!
Fabulous my dear
Very new to me such style of writing '' not the form''.
and amazed me too
Mona Rose
raj
Thu, 2010-12-30 15:13
Dear Mona
i just posted the corrected version "The Call"....
Happy New Year to you and your beloveds..
raj (sublime_ocean)
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