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Wonderment
Were Angels sleeping
over land of rising Sun
when tsunami struck?
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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Hooded Stranger
Thu, 2011-03-17 15:40
Raj
Raj,
an interesting question, cleverly created by way of Haiku...a Japanese form of poetry.
Very clever my friend,
Enjoyed it,
HS
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raj
Fri, 2011-03-18 15:01
Dear Dan
thank you for stopping by...good to know you enjoyed it...
raj (sublime_ocean)
scribbler
Thu, 2011-03-17 16:19
Uh oh
Guess my tsunami Haiku will have to wait a day or two now lol. The angels must have wanted new company............stan
raj
Fri, 2011-03-18 15:02
Dear Stan
thank you for your comment..i liked your response "the Angels must have wanted new company"....looking forward to see your haiku...
warmly..
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Fri, 2011-03-18 15:03
thank you Shirl for your
thank you Shirl for your comment...
much love..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Kailashana2
Thu, 2011-03-17 18:16
no angels fear to tread
no angels fear to tread
the epicenter
of creation
and destruction
that loom ahead
~A
raj
Fri, 2011-03-18 15:04
Dear Anna..
thank you for your response...
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Sat, 2011-03-19 15:52
Thank you Chrys for the read
Thank you Chrys for the read and appreciative comment
raj (sublime_ocean)