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Were Angels sleeping
over land of rising Sun
when tsunami struck?

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an interesting question, cleverly created by way of Haiku...a Japanese form of poetry.

Very clever my friend,

Enjoyed it,


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thank you for stopping by...good to know you enjoyed it...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Guess my tsunami Haiku will have to wait a day or two now lol. The angels must have wanted new company............stan

thank you for your comment..i liked your response "the Angels must have wanted new company"....looking forward to see your haiku...


raj (sublime_ocean)

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thank you Shirl for your comment...

much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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no angels fear to tread
the epicenter
of creation
and destruction
that loom ahead


thank you for your response...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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Thank you Chrys for the read and appreciative comment

raj (sublime_ocean)

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