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Reflection
I was lost
standing beside the ocean
listening to the tumultuous waves
lapping at my feet;
leaving me reflective
to relate
with the bigger picture
surrounded by
air, water. wind,
and a fire in the belly
I was searching
for that Eureka moment
I turned
only to notice
my footprints were consumed
by the receding waves
In that moment I found
a new path
of enlightenment
to be relentless
and make most
of what lies ahead;
like a pearl in an Oyster
polished continuum
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Shadowdancer3349
Tue, 2018-09-25 08:30
Raj
I like the way you depict perhaps your past being erased(by the waves) and your future lies ahead
raj
Tue, 2018-09-25 14:14
thanks SD
for taking time to read and comment...you have read it right...
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raj (sublime_ocean)