Dear Jayne, I liked this twist, speaking in the past when its in the future.
I liked the simplicity of the message, it flows down like a thought
and has a tip like that of a grass straw with a dew drop on the end.

The only thing that seemed slightly illogical was the planet,
and the moon, as the moon isn't that also a planet? But on looking in Wik,
I find it has not yet been promoted to that category, so my thought is
wrong. I mention it, because it interested me .

Love Ann.
You'd think we lived on the moon here, its all so white!!

The Moon is the only natural ....satellite ....of the Earth,[d][7] and the fifth largest satellite in the Solar System
and
did you perhaps imply
lose.???. ...................................to loose control
i thought ....maybe I ain't right

Satellites go around planets
only the Zodiac made an exception ...
7500 years ago.. man made error
earth being a planet..

lovely x

I would not change anything any more, as it is in its simplicity it says everything, grand write,
Yours as always Ian.T

and waiting all your life for someone
That is special especially since you revealed what you have been through