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Too Dumb For A Title

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chatterbox jiber jabber yak attack clackin' clatter

this can happen on paper too
it does all the time
I know
I do

as the verbal vandal, striking again,
I ramble and amble to
no logical end

practice and practice
that's what they say
and I could be named
..."Motor Mouth of the Page"

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Comments

I like it, especially the line the verbal vandal, striking again.

Louise

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

give it a title

cheers,
Jess
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