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Sky/ Ground

The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled

Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger

Casts its ceaseless grasp
On the shining beach
above the cowering tide

Time languors
At the foot of cobwebs
Between the glowing grass

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idaho and then east to Kentucky
america is one big assed country
beautiful.............
I was almost an american
my dad was an american

saw much

died young

I like this poem very much
words shunted in like a mixed freight

listening to House of the rising sun
by the Animals

reading these words...

fitting to the music

Thank You!

Which .book at bedtime will this be in, a short but good read

Hi

not much to be said except I really love this one my favourite lines

The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled

Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger

sigh a lovely read I thoroughly enjoyed

love JC x

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