Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Sky/ Ground
The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
Casts its ceaseless grasp
On the shining beach
above the cowering tide
Time languors
At the foot of cobwebs
Between the glowing grass
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
Esker
Thu, 2013-02-28 11:02
been out west....
idaho and then east to Kentucky
america is one big assed country
beautiful.............
I was almost an american
my dad was an american
saw much
died young
I like this poem very much
words shunted in like a mixed freight
listening to House of the rising sun
by the Animals
reading these words...
fitting to the music
Thank You!
Frenchf
Wed, 2013-03-27 15:57
What were you describing
Which .book at bedtime will this be in, a short but good read
Seren
Thu, 2013-03-28 06:16
Hi
Hi
not much to be said except I really love this one my favourite lines
The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
sigh a lovely read I thoroughly enjoyed
love JC x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats