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Horse 25WL

Look not- towards the furyed pain
Turn horse- towards the sullyed swain
The riddle tangled in horses mane
Bet the devil, with thine eyes sane

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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What did you think of my title?
Last few words: 
Wow words are fun .. I suspect some misspellings in this one but whatever 25 words long is what it means .. more mockery for stupid things
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Nd sullied?
Is there a riddle that I've not identified?

Just the word flow sounds great..
I listen to music and I like the lyrics
and the old poetic masters and

Just to get the mind working
or flexible.....

I enjoy the use of punctuation too
and I wrote a poem including
it in my works

Again I like this..

Thank You!

especially with lovely language. An aspect most often missing in poems I've read recently, which has made me a reluctant reader.

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