Ok.. This is what I was thinking of. I know I haven't mentioned punctuation earlier, but I think of it as I was playing with the line-breaks. Please feel free to ignore it all if it opposes with your intentions. It is your poem and you know better what you want to say.

I wandered into a land[;] [I'd add a semi-colon to expand the thought]

a land without mirrors,

full of happy, jovial people[,]

albeit [,]raggedy[,]and unkempt [I'd drop the commas for a smoother flow]

but no one seemed to notice[.] [I'd replace the full-stop with a semi-colon] again to expand a thought

appearance was never mentioned. [I'd replace the full stop with a semi-colon to join this line and the next one with the previous ones]

manners were.

it seems that [,] how one is treated[,] [I'd drop the comma in the middle and add one at the end of the line]

is the only reflection

of one's self that is needed.

Imagine that!

Hope that helps a bit.

Best regards

Really wish that time would stand still for a while, but as we all know it scurries on in an endless stream, in which I am caught and cannot fail but to go with the flow.
Thanks for your reply, and I believe the fairest of them all is those of our opposite sex, they shine where we just trundle along. Will talk later or tomorrow it is late and I have a few things still to do,
Take care my friend and keep writing,
Yours as always Ian..

PS:- One of my Mirrors:-
Mirror

I was standing there
in full suns glare
looking at my image
I smiled it willingly shared

Damn me if it didn’t fall
as the sun followed its track
Amazing sights were thrown back
A thousand me’s as it shattered there.

A prismatic paradise in air
Colours not seen before
then that silence
after the scream.

Seven years I have held that sight
now I can at last say goodnight
to all the bad luck of mine
but the sight was so divine

Ian.T