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mirror mask

Submitted by emeka ozurumba on Mon, 2014-08-04 04:36

Ksam nori fo secaf
Sabo nineb fo tseirp
Dewob daeh lla
Siangisni sgnik gniteem
Aiffar dniheb seldoon
Sredro riaffa
Nemhcneh tsrif fo eohs fo sezis nugungra
Elbapac gniklaw retaw
Sdaeb gniees erofeb sllehs
Netsil llahs dna etum lautum
Exnelis tnarongi hguorht
Nehtaeh ot dehctef raf
Evord enord gnizzeb
Erof fo secnirp nacirfa
Tnelavoc dehcattanu
Ecnassianner latem eht erofeb
Erats kcalb sllaw der yvan
Ssem hsem hsram
 

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words: 
encrypt
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Mon, 2014-08-04 06:58

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or it would be on Foxnews.
There is no need for cheap tricks like this.
The first and last lines
mask iron of faces
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mess mesh marsh

Why would you want me to spend all that time just reversing spelling. Is the poem worth it?

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Ian.T

Sat, 2014-08-09 19:13

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Just need a hand mirror to read this but that would only show it was not written correctly to be a mirror image, at the time of day I read these poems and comments it is not going to happen, it did waste a little of my time, and that is valuable to me and may have stopped me writing another comment or some other needed job.
Now come on stop messing with the poetry I am sure with your word strength you don't have to stoop to this type of work,
Yours Ian.T

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