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God and Moses Have A Chat
God said:
"I got five commandments, already".
Moses said:
"How much you vont for them, my dear?"
God said:
"They're free, yet."
And Moses said:
"I'll take two packs, Oy vay."
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London, Culture Capital of the World
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Siegfried Sassoon, Wilfred Owen, Rupert Brooke, Chaucer, Shakespeare to name but a few. And VERY IMPORTANTLY: Erich Fried, a leftwing Austrian of Jewish ancestry who fled the Nazis and became a British citizen in 1949., And, other writers (non-poets mainly): Raymond Chandler, Irvine Welsh, Anthony Burgess, Graham Greene, Charles Bukowski, John le Carré, Anthony Horowitz, Mick Herron, Margaret Attwood, Edna O'Brian, Maeve Binchy., Writers who I find vastly over-rated: TS Eliot, Virgina Woolf, Sylvia Plath, Phil Larkin, E.A. Poe, A. Ginsburg, Longfellow, Gerald Manley Hopkins (actually I LOATHE Hopkins more than damson-dappled words can say).
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Dandini
Wed, 2021-01-27 12:20
I found this under the
I found this under the "undiscovered works" tab - it is very funny. I am amazed that no one has commented on it for eight months - is there no justice?
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Wed, 2021-01-27 14:00
This former member was kicked off site for repeatedly ignoring
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Dandini
Thu, 2021-01-28 11:37
I am tempted to read more.
I am tempted to read more.
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