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Each On Reach One

Put yourself second
Aid those in need
You can make a difference

If everybody
Took a moment

For someone else
On this planet
Radical change
Would Occur
And everyone would be
Rewarded some
Day

Last few words: 
This is an acrostic.
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Comments

So true.
Jx

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Sorry to fuck up your acrostic but don't ever preach, mate, please.

I put myself second
Aid those in need
I can make a difference

If everybody
Took a moment

To stop those destroying
This planet
and make them pay
Radical change
Would Occur
And the reward would be
the survival of our species.

cheers,
Jess, Neopoet Directors
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always welcomed. good to be back. God to see you around.

In ink,
Dabbler

author comment

Funny, I didn't take this to be preaching, just a reminder to humanity that by putting others first, the world would be a better place. I also whole heartedly agree with your version Weirdelf, to me, the message didn't matter which person it was written in.
Jx

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