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Each On Reach One
Put yourself second
Aid those in need
You can make a difference
If everybody
Took a moment
For someone else
On this planet
Radical change
Would Occur
And everyone would be
Rewarded some
Day
Last few words:
This is an acrostic.
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jane210660
Mon, 2016-06-06 15:25
So true. Jx
So true.
Jx
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weirdelf
Mon, 2016-06-06 17:39
So good to see you and you know I love you but...
(that sounds ominous at the beginning of a crit, eh, it is)
Sorry to fuck up your acrostic but don't ever preach, mate, please.
I put myself second
Aid those in need
I can make a difference
If everybody
Took a moment
To stop those destroying
This planet
and make them pay
Radical change
Would Occur
And the reward would be
the survival of our species.
cheers,
Jess
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IKnowNoBox
Mon, 2016-06-06 18:27
Thanks for the sound crit.
always welcomed. good to be back. God to see you around.
In ink,
Dabbler
author commentjane210660
Tue, 2016-06-07 04:58
Funny, I didn't take this to
Funny, I didn't take this to be preaching, just a reminder to humanity that by putting others first, the world would be a better place. I also whole heartedly agree with your version Weirdelf, to me, the message didn't matter which person it was written in.
Jx
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