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Bare Feet Walk
walking bare feet
they start talking
it's all live footage
of sensory images
screened over
flint, limestone, moss
documenting
laughter, grief, silence
of those who walked bare before
in darkness and light
thorn in the sole
becomes a memoir
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Free verse
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