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Remembering
Lonnie
Member since October 15, 2008
Member, 2008 → 2018
Ode To P.T.S.D.
Ode To P.T.S.D.
When hope is but a memory
of things that were not meant to be
frozen in a frame of mind
that sanity has left behind
days seem long and full of pain
a never-ending acid rain
eating at your very soul
until it is no longer whole
when even those you love seem lost
victims of the holocaust
your daily life has fallen in
like some enormous pit of sin
when time is but an enemy
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designed to never set you free
and flashbacks fom a sordid past
are all that ever seem to last
ghosts of those you used to know
return in some relentless show
that plays encores within your brain
and slowly drives you quite insane
when even God seems not to care
about the burdens that you bear
this is now your emptiness
a pawn of post traumatic stress
Lonnie’s timeline
- January 2018
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22 Mon
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02 Tue
- August 2017
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09 Wed
- August 2015
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25 TuePosting milestone
100 poems posted
- October 2013
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14 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2010
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29 Tue
- April 2010
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08 ThuCritique milestone
1,000 critiques given
- January 2010
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15 FriHighest posting month
January 2010 — 8 poems
- October 2009
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14 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2008
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24 FriFirst critique offered
on "Remember" by @yenti
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14 TueFirst publication
Shadowman (since unpublished)
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Vietnam Vet / Hippie / Mountain Man. Outspoken yet reclusive, un-politically correct, will defend to the death things that I believe in. I love to write poetry and songs, sing, fish, and watch old westerns. If I had my druthers, I'd probably live 15 miles from Bigfoot's last known whereabouts!
Location: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA
Poe
Frost
Bob Dylan
Recent Work
Ode To P.T.S.D.
Some Words On Being Homeless
Condemned Communion
Housewife
Housewife
Learning
Wormhole Prophecy
A soldier's Legacy
A modern parody
Donald Trump POTUS
Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.
Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal): The Horror Story | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2015-07-01 | Concluded |
| Olympic Pool (initial workshop) | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2011-05-16 | Concluded |