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Donald Trump POTUS

Donald Trump POTUS

He’ll build a border wall it’s true
and strengthen infrastructure too
He’ll make our trade with other lands
bring power back into our hands

no veteran will do without
our fighting force will have more clout
The nations of the world will see
America stand strong and free

Isis murderers will pay
for every life they’ve hacked away
and future enemies will know
what price they’ll pay to strike a blow

our workforce will be strong again
and health care will not cause us pain
our Constitution will not be
attacked by those who’d love to see

America in dire need
a third world country forced to bleed
our Government will grant once more
the things its people ask it for

all of this will come to pass
if we just get up off our ass
and vote for who we know can do
the things he’s said for me and you

Donald Trump is now the man
who knows the score and has the plan
to end our suffering and pain
and make America great again

C. Lon R. Bruso

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Bravo. bravissimmo !

Good rhythm and rhyme as per usual. As to subject, some leftists seem to have forgotten that free speech applies to others also. In my opinion Anybody would be better than that serial liar Hellary........stan

Without getting into controversies about if it's going to be right or wrong...i must say the poem will boost his campaign...for good or bad time alone will prove...i liked the poem though...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

great poem and well written Lonnie!

saw Jerry Lewis talk in an interview
and he's right....Trump is a showman
so he may show once the crown
is bestowed upon him the weary court!

thank U!

Respect your poem and your views, but American politics has become a giant game show. And i fear Britain is heading along the same lines, where we're voting for presentation not policy. Regards Roscoe....

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

my thanks to all who have read and commented on this piece as a poem and not just as a political point of view, even though it is. I am ever so grateful for the fact that nobody has as yet challenged my opinion or my reasoning.

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Look at the choices we've been given. A serial liar (Hellary), A socialist(Sanders), and an extremist conservative (Cruz). Any wonder Trump is doing well? lol

Hard to argue with a winner though, and yes, bloody fine prosody.

Rachelle loved this and asked me to tell you so. She has been an ardent Trump supporter from the start and has felt rather beleaguered, outnumbered about a thousand to one around here. She is a woman of strong convictions.

cheers,
Jess
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She would appreciate it and you would know that a copy went to a real fan.
Rachelle and I argue as much as you and I do.
She's loved the idea of you ever since I told her about this one of my Christian, gun toting, conservative, Viet vet, American friends.

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A great write on the new Pres, we have a similar situation here a new wave..
People are so sick of being the Plebs to a few, Build a bloody wall then put factories in the damn thing and education buildings in it so that next door can work and become better.
How many immigrants would not need to go to the USA if the work was there and the pay and education they seek is just handy.
About time a country such as the USA started to use its control of others for the betterment of the world instead of a few rich assholes.
And it is Sunday..
Take care Lonnie great to see a piece by you again,
Yours as always Ian..

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let us all kneel and pray that the hellfire of God and our great leader
shall striketh them and make them Lie like smouldering cordwood
before thy missles striketh we! and now rise and we shall turn to
chapter Five of the great preppers book on how to care for Your
blessed AR-15s...Fresh batteries blessed from chaplan Charley
for your night scopes will be distrubuted with the wafer and wine...
Amen!! ...

I dont live in socialist state....if I did and was of sound health
I would be blasting Ukrainians...or being blown up..
there are tons of rules for the ordinary...if not..then the gangs
would apply me....Maybe I drive there....past the starving..
dragged off who cant follow rules..No gualags now....worse!

and I like America..my father was an american...
but I Love canada!!

I knew Trump would get in....had a look at the others..
sadly shook my head..
in a way he is the Modern American Teddy Roosevelt!
perhaps the new deal will be building defense for
America....they did try to come north and take the riches
here...instead..they own..via brazil and puppet conglomerates
the steel making rights..lumber trade restrictions..beef..oil
etc..but leave us enough to get by!!!

I am very book read...paper read...
I dont judge....every country needs a strong queen
king....time will tell...

in the past they have all been wealthy elitists..
and I believe in this!!
given a choice to be of super wealth or the barely
there I will take the barely there scene...

a great poem!!

Thank U Lonnie!

Mr Wolf!

this is a well thought out and well written poem. it flows nicely. but I am in the other camp. still love you to pieces, though!

*hugs, Cat

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