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Matrixx
Shine on your moonlight matrix maze
The mist of morning-- sought then raised
Your cloak of twilight
Its hem has frayed
As sunset sings beneath
The waves
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Frenchf
Thu, 2013-02-21 19:06
Short and sweet
Appreciated
sueb
Fri, 2013-02-22 15:26
lovely x
lovely x