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The Wild Side Of Oblivion

Meet me on the wild side of oblivion
by shadowed moon light
we can play at being
what we will never be by day

Smoke filled skies
essence of dust filled dreams
astride a pure white stallion
with lightening hooves

In fields of poppies and lavender
petals for a bed
there to sleep between the raindrops
and be as one
Only on the wild side of oblivion

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some very charming images in your piece, c lynn brooks. I hope you continue editing.

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

thank you for your kind words

Chrys

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about oblivion
my personal loved word
but not that side
yet
this side of oblivion
as I still live on

thank you

Chrys

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Hello, Chrys,
The Wild Side of Oblivion - somehow the title is fitting, even though the poem feels peaceful, calm, and tame. I could read this several times and travel a different magical trip each time. Dreamlike.
Thank you!
L

thank you very much

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Got a typo on first line. The wild side of oblivion is where I'd like to live but I reckon her in my cabin in the woods will suffice.Liked your image laden poem

typo fixed now. Thank you stopping by

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