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The Wild Side Of Oblivion
Meet me on the wild side of oblivion
by shadowed moon light
we can play at being
what we will never be by day
Smoke filled skies
essence of dust filled dreams
astride a pure white stallion
with lightening hooves
In fields of poppies and lavender
petals for a bed
there to sleep between the raindrops
and be as one
Only on the wild side of oblivion
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Triskelion
Mon, 2021-06-28 15:47
There are
some very charming images in your piece, c lynn brooks. I hope you continue editing.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
c lynn brooks
Wed, 2021-06-30 14:33
thank
thank you for your kind words
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author commentlovedly
Sat, 2021-06-26 17:58
I too just composed
about oblivion
my personal loved word
but not that side
yet
this side of oblivion
as I still live on
c lynn brooks
Wed, 2021-06-30 14:34
lovedly
thank you
Chrys
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author commentLavender
Sun, 2021-06-27 22:09
The Wild Side of Oblivion
Hello, Chrys,
The Wild Side of Oblivion - somehow the title is fitting, even though the poem feels peaceful, calm, and tame. I could read this several times and travel a different magical trip each time. Dreamlike.
Thank you!
L
c lynn brooks
Wed, 2021-06-30 14:35
Laveder
thank you very much
Chrys
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author commentscribbler
Mon, 2021-06-28 11:55
Hi Chrys
Got a typo on first line. The wild side of oblivion is where I'd like to live but I reckon her in my cabin in the woods will suffice.Liked your image laden poem
c lynn brooks
Wed, 2021-06-30 14:37
Stan
typo fixed now. Thank you stopping by
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