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Waves Of Blue

Talk me into the wee hours of the morning
quiet the fears of love lost and longing
hold me captive with words so dear
speak them softly
so only I may hear
write them in a verse that is you
help me end these waves of blue

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What beauty in this It's lyrical like the saddest of songs. In a few short lines you have captured the pain of missing someone and the longing to have them close. Just gorgeous.

Thank you...Teddy

Thank you , this was written for no one in particular it just reflects the mood I was in

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I know and that's the reason i love it. very musical.

Thank you...Teddy

a nice cameo, tight like a jewel.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

Thank you very much

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