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Waves Of Blue
Talk me into the wee hours of the morning
quiet the fears of love lost and longing
hold me captive with words so dear
speak them softly
so only I may hear
write them in a verse that is you
help me end these waves of blue
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Teddy15
Sat, 2020-08-22 22:05
Dear Chrys
What beauty in this It's lyrical like the saddest of songs. In a few short lines you have captured the pain of missing someone and the longing to have them close. Just gorgeous.
Thank you...Teddy
c lynn brooks
Sun, 2020-08-23 07:12
Teddy
Thank you , this was written for no one in particular it just reflects the mood I was in
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Sun, 2020-08-23 07:14
Dear Chrys
I know and that's the reason i love it. very musical.
Thank you...Teddy
tyro
Sun, 2020-08-23 09:00
a nice cameo, tight like a
a nice cameo, tight like a jewel.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
c lynn brooks
Sun, 2020-08-23 10:56
Tyro
Thank you very much
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