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Waves Of Blue

Submitted by c lynn brooks on Sat, 2020-08-22 20:29

Talk me into the wee hours of the morning
quiet the fears of love lost and longing
hold me captive with words so dear
speak them softly
so only I may hear
write them in a verse that is you
help me end these waves of blue

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Teddy15

Sat, 2020-08-22 22:05

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What beauty in this It's lyrical like the saddest of songs. In a few short lines you have captured the pain of missing someone and the longing to have them close. Just gorgeous.

Thank you...Teddy

c lynn brooks

Sun, 2020-08-23 07:12

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Thank you , this was written for no one in particular it just reflects the mood I was in

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Teddy15

Sun, 2020-08-23 07:14

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I know and that's the reason i love it. very musical.

Thank you...Teddy

tyro

Sun, 2020-08-23 09:00

a nice cameo, tight like a jewel.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

c lynn brooks

Sun, 2020-08-23 10:56

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Thank you very much

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