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Walkiing in the night
I went walking alone in the dead of the night The birds had taken flight Except for the nocturnal owl Flying silently about Not a soul was in sight Hear the echoes of my footsteps As I went walking in the night
Eulekia
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raj
Thu, 2018-08-02 07:56
Hi Eulekia
good short poem making the night come alive...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Eulekia
Mon, 2018-08-27 08:30
My poem Walking in the night
Dear Raj
thanks for your comment. Please send one of your poems to me. You can contact me at my email address [email protected]
Eulekia
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author commentraj
Wed, 2018-08-29 14:01
Dear Eulekia.
Dear Eulekia.
my poems are all listed on my profile page....is there any specific theme on which you would want me to try to write a poem?
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raj (sublime_ocean)
themoonman
Wed, 2018-08-29 14:07
Eulekia,
Hi and welcome to the site. Please do not
include your personal email, we highly suggest
you learn the world is not always nice. I like to
think nobody here would take advantage but ...
thank you.