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Eleagance

I am smooth
I am sleek
I glide through life effortlessly
People want me for prestige
I attract those who wish to walk with me
I am eleagant thats plain to see

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do you mean 'Elegance'?
Good definition of elegance. I suggest dropping the last line as it adds nothing to the text(imo)

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