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The Mirror

It smiled as we approached
We came nearer
To check our appearances
Did our clothes hang well
We made adjustments here and there
The mirror knew our faults
It smiled again as we left
We would come again

Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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Dear Neopoets do you like my poem. You can contact me at my email address [email protected] Eulekia
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I congratulate you, ironically [smiles a bit weirdly].

What? You think we want Hallmark cards here?

Follow this up with the courage to directly attsck mediocrity in all forms without getting arrested as a member of ISIS.

Seriously, Eulekia, I see great promise here.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Weirdelf
thank you for your comment on my poem. I will be sending more of my poems in.

Eulekia

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in the way of critique to others.
This is a community, not a service.
Oh, we could offer a critique service if your were prepared to pay. But unless it was a lot of money we wouldn't do it anyway.
We are a community.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Dear Jess
I will do so more often.

Eulekia

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