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Like a jewel

Sparkling Shining Dazzling
A Diamond ring
A Ruby set in a stone
Polished Opal
Glittering Emerald
Splendid to see
Just like a jewel

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of short, simple verse and stories, but this seems a little extreme. I felt like I was looking at "sparklies" through the eyes of a raven or magpie. When you see them in that light, they are indeed, a jewel. I need something more than a list of gems. ~ Geezer.
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